Day 667 - April 13 - My Evolution
I hope you don't mind - I have finished another poem, which I hope you find worthwhile. It's entitled "My Evolution".
I envisioned, amidst gloried distress,
a creature - small, and nasty, and full of hate
lying in its own vile and horrid mess;
wondering what had brought it to this state.
I envisioned, amidst gloried pain,
this splintered, devious, broken thing,
striving with passioned pangs to attain
an end to all its suffering.
I envisioned, amidst gloried grief,
as it writhed under burdens of painéd weight,
grasping for grasp on the forces that forced its brief,
ungainly, unwieldy form into this fetid state.
I envisioned, amidst gloried horror,
this thing, as coercion bent it nigh,
and in so doing forced its gaze to soar -
wondering how? And why? And...why?
I envisioned, amidst gloried torment,
this myopic being begin, beyond its strife,
to perceive a Someone whose intent
so distinctly was different from its own wretched life.
I envisioned, amidst gloried fears,
through pressure, and strain, and tension, and pain;
by hurt, and burn, and tearing, and tears,
the creation this Someone in His creature has lain.
I see, amidst gloried awe,
the first halting steps of this thing;
no longer what it was, it totters toward the One I saw;
toward the Image it is becoming.
I cannot see, amidst gloried glory,
what next lies in the fating
as this creature that is me, entwined in His story,
steps closer to He who is waiting.
Eric
----------------------------------------
Print This Page

2 Comments:
Wow! I got goosebumps reading your poem!! I read it a couple times to understand it. It shows your pain, how you see yourself, and the anticipation of being with the Lord.
How wonderful it will be one day, to be out of pain and suffering and in paradise with our Lord.
Praying for you all!
Love,
Kim
Oooooh, what a story. That contained such expression- I got it. Thanks for sharing!
Post a Comment
Links to this post:
Create a Link
<< Home